New Idea after pitch

We pitched our idea to Matt Luke and Paul and this time we were more certain that our idea was solid. However after all the hard work, discussions and planning our idea was turned down and we had to change almost the whole thing once more. But this was alright because they put us into reality and asked us if we would keep watching it if we were the audience and we responded n. So now we want to make it more appealing and more audience-friendly. We have not scrapped our whole idea but we have made a significant amount of changes to the original idea.

Firstly they tried to convince us to change where we were going to shoot from the media studio to Ted Jackson office in Cornhill manor. But we stuck to our choice because the environment is better the studio has more space for the wide shots and also because it will be more convenient shooting in the media studio.

Then we changed the storyline a bit. instead of Lynn choking Bob to death with a belt we are going to have bob dead at the beginning of the scene already and we are going to give our audience the impression that he has been poisoned to death because our other idea required too much contact between the 2 actors which could have been seen as inappropriate.

but other than the slight change to the storyline all we have only added a few props and taken out a few props.